FLASH FRIDAY CHALLENGE: 98 WORDS
PHOTO PROMPT © SANDRA CROOK
Kimmy hugs her knees tightly as she balances on the steep rooftop, glaring at the old foster home. A shiver creeps down her spine. She holds herself tighter.
How much longer before they notice she’s missing? What will happen if she’s caught?
A siren echoes throughout the darkening sky. A distress signal to alert the village of a lost child. She’s no longer safe. But then, she hadn’t been safe for months.
She leaps across cottage tops as she makes her way to the next town, fueled by fear, adrenaline and desperation. Carrying nothing but her teddy bear.
I hope she finds safety! You convey her fear well.
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Thank you! She’s a resilient child. The odds are in her favor! ☺️ appreciate your time!
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Dread to think what she is running away from. Hope she makes it. Good story.
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Thanks Iain. Not the direction I thought I would take. That’s for sure. I’m sure she will prevail!
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Dear Laura,
You left us hanging from the rooftops. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. Appreciate it!
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Such a haunting tale. Beautifully done.
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Thanks for reading. Appreciate the feedback!
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Heartbreaking story–to think what she’s running away from. I hope she finds safety.
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I’m sure by now she’s long gone! ☺️ thanks for reading!
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Great sense of fer and desperation. I hope she finds sanctuary
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Thanks Michael! She’s got the determination too! She’ll be just fine!
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Well done, Laura! You really grabbed me and then left me hanging!
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Wow thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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